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  1. Hello loves and hugs and misses off topics school is madness maybe when I graduate in 5 years I'll be more active meh
  2. I am now going to be a genius and ask what grade 8 is. 13-14? That's what wikipedia tells me. :D Hi five bruh.
  3. Do you want an amusing picture of me? Haha I have the craziest friends. :)
  4. no any works I promise! Pretty or not. :P Thank guys! *goes off and does research*
  5. Naw, it's a production that we're doing, which is casting a magical bird as the main characters. Thought I'd see what could research to understand the role better! Even a short bit that has birds, or flying thing that are partially human? *hopeful face* I know in Van Helsing there were pretty vampire bride things that turned into creepy little flying creatures. That counts, too! I'll attach the images in a spoiler below, please don't click if you're easily freaked out!
  6. Hey guys! I was wondering if any of you knew any movies that featured people as birds! Movies, musicals, dances, anything! Besides "Swan lake" and "black swan", any ideas? Thanks!
  7. I have terrible poetry skills WE ARE ALL IN THIS TOGETHER. :D I write without planning, but honestly, really good poems can't just "flow from inspiration", unless your inspiration is previously coupled with lots of experience in iambic and structure. I don't like planning though, so that's why they're terrible. :P At most, I write it, then go back a few week later and see how I can better the flow and/or structure. I spend time on mine, but I don't really mind either. :D JB I LIEK YOUR STYLE (returning favour of very failed crit hahaha) lalalala lalalala elmos werldd SUMMER By Sweetdang Unfold your ears and listen Open your eyes and see The patter of feet; the flutter of wings Her dance, yet you're blinded to she. She sends you grassy kisses Roses by midnight blue The grace from the tips of her leafy toes Winter's Love frost to woo. Lines of joy and sorrow Etched on the willow tree Glittering sparkles upon rippled shell Displayed for all to see. A cluster of Heather's petals A pledge of her life with you Sunshine piercing Morning's mist The baby ducklings, too. Drooping lids of a tired cat Dandelions floating away On the wind into the clouds On a lazy summer's day.
  8. CRAZY busy sigh. It's like a sudden rush of life catching up with me! And secs threes are robbed of 2 (out of 4) weeks of holidays, for "enrichment and studies".
  9. Hi so quick update that draik is going to have to wait for the holidays. :(
  10. KNOCKING ON THE DOOR By Sweetdang Footsteps knock on the worn-out path The road more-traveled Mistakes more made A sliver of sin follows Flickering its forked tongue. It slithers along the long grass bordering the route And as it passes The long, brown, dead stalks stand petrified And then crumble to dust Touched with poison. It hangs, also On the ankles of the man Shadowing, shadowing, In literal sense And mimicking movement, Learning from the damned. Sometimes it moves out, As if to strike at the heel with its poisoned fangs But then it retreats Because the man will end up in the fire With or without its help. Why waste the effort? The lines across the page are going nowhere Merely a copy of the story of pierced hands Forever etched on the bloodied back With skin torn and hanging in shreds Throwing a message at the world. But no one listens. Footsteps still travel down the road That ends in a consumption of fire Step by step Inch by inch Dragging against the road And knocking the path That is the Door. The sounds echos through Hell.
  11. *impressed whistle* That was pretty awesome. Forget that, it was amazing! I really could actually "see" it, the only line that was a little odd to me was the one bout his eyes. Cool line, but not an accurate image conjured in my head! :P But fantastic. Simply fantastic.
  12. I was at 200,000, after taking 600,000 out to spend on books. :P
  13. i HAVE ADBLOCKER, SO I'm not so bothered. Sorry about the caps at the beginning, didn't realize it was on! What curse words?
  14. Hello I liked that! And the simply-sad kind of shadow it cast, plus the fact it went back in a full circle. Very nice. :) I do take quibbles with the fact that it's a rhyming poem, though, because if it rhymes - it ALLLLLL Rhymes. as such I take up problem with this line: "Once we had commenced dating", if you would fit a "dated" in there if would flow more nicely. Also, the rhyming went a little off at times, and I wouldn't be so particular about this (because I'm not very skilled at utilizing the iambic pentameter myself) if it didn't rhyme. Again, I just have a thing with rhymes - if you want them, then they better be PURRRRFECT. Sorry haha just me. :-) But that's all the issue i take up with that, other than that it was liked a story being played out! Good job! :D Here's one that's rather dark: Fine by Sweetdang You came to me You knocked me down Shoved my face Straight to the ground. I stood up Brushed myself off I said "Fine." I came to you Stabbed you in the heart Left you in a pool Of your own blood You couldn't say Anything At all. hurhurhur don't ask. Okay yes both of what I've posted so far aren't "proper" attempts at writing, so when I post one, would you prefer a dark one or happy one? Mine are mostly dark.
  15. Hello, and welcome! Do I get Bonus BONUS points because you just said Hi... TO ME? ;D